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三、写作原则No. 1

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2002.1 CET-4

Directions: For this part, you are allowed thirty minutes to write a composition on the topic: A Letter to the University President about the Canteen Service on Campus. You should write at least 100 words, and base your composition on the outline given in Chinese below:

• 假设你是李明，请你就本校食堂的状况给校长写出一封信，内容应涉及食堂的饭菜质量、价格、环境、服务等，可以是表扬，可以是批评建议，也可以兼而有之。

第一段

• Dear Mr. President,

• I am sophomore from the Department of Law. I am writing the letter in purpose of complaining about the food and service in the canteen on campus.

第二段

To be frank, I am rather

disappointed at the food quality,

price and service in the canteen.

First, the dishes are scarcely well

cooked and most of them taste

the same.

第二段

• Secondly, most of the dishes

there are priced so high that some

students cannot even afford them.

Thirdly, the service in the canteen

is far from satisfying and the inside

of the canteen always seem untidy.

第三段

• To solve the problem, I suggest that

another canteen be built and a

mechanism of competition be

introduced between the old and the

new. Besides, both the canteens

should be subject to the students’

supervision.

第三段

• Dining is an everyday issue for students.

It may affect their academic performance.

Therefore, I sincerely hope this letter can

draw your attention to the matter and I

hope the problems mentioned above be

solved as soon as possible. Yours sincerely ， Li Ming

• January 12th, 2002Dear Mr. President, I am a student here. I write you this letter to say a few words about the dining halls in this university. First, the food in the dining halls is not delicious enough, either too salty or too watery, especially in Dining Hall 3. Second, the prices in dining hall are very high and usually we cannot afford it. Third, the dining halls are always very crowed and we can seldom find seats if arriving there not early enough and the tables are not cleaned in time. Anyway, what is good is that the working staff in the dining halls are quite kind, friendly and patient, and they usually try their best to meet the demand of the students and teachers. Thus I suggest enlarging the dining halls and improving the quality of foods and reducing the prices to what is acceptable to all the students. Yours sincerely, Li Ming

Directions: For this part, you are allowed thirty minutes to write a letter. Suppose you are Zhang Ying. Write a letter to Xiao Wang, a schoolmate of yours who is going to visit you during the week-long holiday. You should write at least 100 words according to the suggestions given below in Chinese.1 表示欢迎

2 提出过度假安排的建议 3 提醒应注意的事项

Model Composition

• June 23, 2013Dear Xiao Wang, I'm very happy that you will come to Beijing and spend holidays with me. It is a long time that we haven't seen each other and I miss you very much. I have always been looking forward to your arrival.

• Since you will stay in Beijing for a week, I suggest you visit some places of interests, such as the Great Wall, the Palace Museum, the Summer Palace, the Tian'An Men Square, Mount Fregrance and etc. If time permits, I can show you around some famous universities like Peking University, Tsinghua University and so on, which are worth your visit.

• As the weather here is changeable, I propose you to wear more clothes in case that it is getting colder. Come here as soon as possible and I can't wait to meet you. Wish you a safe and pleasant trip here. Yours,

• XXX