Lesson Plan: Revise revise revise
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Revision
Nothing’s ever perfect….
What is revision?
Re-seeingRe-shaping
The Writing Process– Invention– Drafting– Revision
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Revision’s Two Parts
Higher Order
(Content)
Lower Order
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Higher Order Revising
Thesis Evidence Development Arrangement
Know your audience AND the “so what?”
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Techniques
Peer ReviewSelf as AudienceRead AloudToulmin AnalysisTake a Break
Lower Order Revising
Transitions Spelling (beware the checker) Word Choice Correct Punctuation! Subject-Verb Agreement
Techniques
Peer Review Read Aloud Backwards paper reading
use your resources
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Group Activity
In groups of two, revise a short
paragraph.
What and how did we revise?
Assignment
For next class complete Toulmin Analysis
of your drafts.
Be prepared to discuss next time.