The Ultimate Competition ` Rachel Barnes

There was a girl named Danielle. Everyone loved her because she was a popular cheerleader and hilarious.

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One day she went to the park with her best friend, Chloe, who is also a cheerleader. Locked arm and arm, they skipped their way down the street. They were just enjoying themselves and singing their favorite song ever called “Body Bounce”.

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On their way to the park, they bumped into their mortal enemies Liza and Phoebe. Danielle has hated Phoebe ever since she threw Captain Crunch at her one day. They were sitting together on this day, because they were all still friends at this point. Chloe took Danielle’s side and Liza, who didn’t like Danielle and Chloe in the first place, sided with Phoebe.

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Liza hated the fact that everybody thought Danielle and Chloe were great dancers because they were on the cheerleading team. Personally, Liza and Phoebe believe that they are dancers than Danielle and Chloe with their Beyonce like dance moves.

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With anger from several years building up inside of her, Liza wanted to say something to Danielle and Chloe. She then says “ We are better dancers than you two.”

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In reaction, Danielle and Chloe started hysterically laughing until the point they were crying. They kept laughing and laughing.

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When Liza saw this, she suddenly became very angry. She gave them her fiercest face.

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Her friend, Phoebe, noticed this and wanted to do something about it. She decided like the good friend that she is to stick up for her friend.

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“Yo Yo Doe! Stop dissing my girl!” said Phoebe to Danielle and Chloe as they were still laughing at Liza’s previous comment.

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At that moment, Danielle and Chloe simultaneously looked each other with confused looks on their faces. Then Chloe and Danielle tell Phoebe off.

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Chloe says “You need to stop acting black, because you aren’t girl!!”

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Danielle added that she needs to stop trying to make doe happen because it is never going to happen.

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Feeling ganged upon, Phoebe is sad and tears come streaming down her face. She is crying really hard at this point.

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Liza can’t believe that these two girls are really making Phoebe cry. She tries to stand up for her friend. However, her quest comes with no truimph.

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Meanwhile, Danielle and Chloe are still laughing at Phoebe and her stupid comment.

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Liza interjects with an I’ll wait in her sassy tone in order to stop Danielle and Chloe’s uncontrollable laughter. She then says “I challenge you two to a dance battle to see who the better dancers really are.”

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Danielle and Chloe think long and hard about Liza’s proposition. They eventually accept her idea and all four of them shake hands on the deal. They decide to meet at park later that day.

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The girls go their separate ways with Danielle and Chloe going in one direction and Liza and Phoebe going in the other direction. They are preparing for intense dance battle that is going to happen soon.

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Danielle and Chloe are very excited at the aspect of being in a dance battle. They are going to bring it all or nothing with their awesome cheer moves.

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Meanwhile, Phoebe has a fantasy about her celebrity crush, Channing Tatum, dancing in the original Step Up! She is feeling inspired by her daydream.

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However, she is not paying attention to anything that Liza is saying to her. Frustrated, Liza snaps Phoebe out of her Channing-filled fantasy and says that they have work to do in order to win.

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Later that afternoon, the girls met up at the park to start their ultimate dance competition. They flipped a coin and it was decided that Danielle and Chloe were going to perform first.

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Danielle takes out her iPhone and looks for the song that they are going to use for their routine.

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The two girls get set into their positions and start their routine.

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After their “great” routine, they finish with a failed lift attempt.

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Then, Phoebe and Liza start their routine with their “raise the roof” moves.

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They finished their routine with the fiercest looks on their faces.

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All girls are thinking about what just happened. They decided that there was no official winner because both routines were so horrible.

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At that moment, they start laughing at their awful routines that they just did. Realizing that their hatred toward one another is dumb, they all apologized and forgave each other for all the horrible things that they said or did to one another.

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They all became friends again and played on the swings like when they were five.

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