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夺取托福独立写作高分四件法宝写作老师吕欣泽

lvxinze@xiaoma.com

小马托福 010-62699622四件法宝

开头“三步走”、结尾“两句话”主体段结构清晰、逻辑合理

词汇的延伸句子的拓展

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一、开头“三步走”结尾“两句话”

（六四原则 七三原则）

小马托福 010-62699622起始段展开三步走：引题、正反、我认为

Nothing is impossible for a willing heart.

1. 引题2. 正反3. 我认为

当今，当我们谈及……时，人们的观点各有不一。一些人认为……，而另一些人认为……我对这个话题的观点是……

小马托福 010-62699622真题再现

Do you agree or disagree with the following statement: The

most important aspect of a job is the money a person earns. Use

specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

小马托福 010-62699622第一步：引题

策略一： Nowadays, when it comes to… people tend

to share various opinions.

策 略 二 ： Currently, there emerges a heated

discussion concerning..., towards which people have

different ideas.

小马托福 010-62699622第一步：引题

• Nowadays, when it comes to what the most crucial

aspect of a job is, people tend to share various opinions.

•Currently, there emerges a heated discussion concerning

the most essential content that a job can bring to us,

towards which people have different ideas.

小马托福 010-62699622第一步：引题

背景法共识法

小马托福 010-62699622第二步：正反

The most important aspect of a job is the money a person earns.

While some people hold the idea that…, others maintain that…

While some people hold the idea that the amount of salaries is

the most critical thing that a job can bring to us, others

consider that there are several other significant aspects that can

never be ignored.

小马托福 010-62699622第三步：我认为

The most important aspect of a job is the money a person

earns.

As far as I am concerned/ From my perspective of view

As far as I am concerned, there are so many other essential

aspects that a job can bring to us and it is extremely hard to

decide which aspect is the most important one.

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Nothing is impossible for a willing heart.

Nowadays, when it comes to what the most important aspect

of a job is, people tend to share various opinions. （引题 )

While some people hold the idea that the amount of money is

the most critical thing that a job can bring to us, others

consider that there are several significant aspects that can

never be ignored. （正反） As far as I am concerned, there

are so many other aspects of a job and it is extremely hard to

decide which aspect is the most important one. （我认为）

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Nothing is impossible for a willing heart.

搞定结尾段

小马托福 010-62699622结尾段的功能

总结全文，升华主旨凑字数 “ 六四原则” or“ 七三原则”一定要有结尾段吗？

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1• From what has

been discussed

above, we may

safely/confidently

2• draw• reach• come to• arrive at

3• the conclusion

that…

结尾段策略一

+ 理由的总结

小马托福 010-62699622From what has been discussed above, we may confidently

arrive at the conclusion that…+ 理由的总结The most important aspect of a job is the money a

person earns.

From what has been discussed above, we may

confidently arrive at the conclusion that the money a

person earns cannot be regarded as the most

important aspect of a job. It largely depends on the

individual’s condition, personality and values.

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Clearly,

Obviously,

all

the

evidence

analysis

supports

justifies

confirms

points to

leads to

a(n) remarkable

sound

just

unmistakable

conclusion

viewpoint

consequence

结尾段策略二

that… + 理由的总结

小马托福 010-62699622Obviously, all the evidence supports a remarkable

conclusion that+ 理由的总结Obviously, all the evidence supports a remarkable

conclusion that the money a person earns cannot be

regarded as the most important aspect of a job. It

largely depends on the individual’s condition,

personality and values.

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二、主体段结构清晰、逻辑合理

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Nothing is impossible for a willing heart.

拿下主体段

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罗列论证（一般用于每段总论点）举例论证

假设论证对比论证

主体段写作方法

小马托福 010-62699622罗列论证

To begin with/ To start with/ First and foremost/ Initially

Furthermore/ Besides/ Moreover/ What is more/ In addition

Lastly/ Last of all/ Last but not least / Finally

小马托福 010-62699622罗列论证

Nothing is impossible for a willing heart.

There are many ways to promote energy conservation.

First and foremost, government can encourage the use of

environmental-friendly energies.

Furthermore ， children should be educated to save energies

as soon as they start school.

Last but not least, it needs collective effort to achieve the goal

of energy conservation.

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举例论证事例

名人轶事他人的故事自己的故事事物

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举例论证 for example

for instance

such as

take… as an example

take…as an illustration

小马托福 010-62699622举例论证

Fast-food preparation has liberated many women and given them chance to do more meaningful things(15 词 ), for instance, a higher-paid job or a more respectable career（ 25 词） .( 事物 )

After obtaining a specific college degree, a job applicant can be competitive for previously unavailable jobs. Take the applicants with Computer Science degrees as an illustration. They would not only be qualified for jobs in high-tech companies, they would also be well prepared for any job with computer skills as a prerequisite. （ 他 人 事例）

小马托福 010-62699622假设论证

Young people should try several different jobs before they take a career in the long term.

If young people try various jobs before they take a career in a long run, they can gain a lot of experiences, knowledge and human resources.

If young people start to engage in a long-term career without trying other different jobs, they will stay more focused on their current occupation and become more professional in a certain field.

小马托福 010-62699622对比论证

正反对比异类对比

同类今夕对比

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小马托福 010-62699622对比论证

while

be compared with

in comparison with

in contrast

to the contrary

on the one hand,…on the other hand,…

however/ nevertheless/ nonetheless

小马托福 010-62699622对比论证—正反对比

The best way to relax and reduce stress is to spend time alone.

Some people consider the best way to relax is to spend time by oneself, while other people hold the idea that the most effective way should be hanging out with family or friends.

小马托福 010-62699622对比论证—异类对比

It is better to live in the country than in the city.

Living in the city actually can bring a lot of disadvantages to people, such as pollution, traffic-jam and noise. To the contrary, living in the country can be extremely beneficial to people. For instance, the fresh air, broad space and quiet environment.

小马托福 010-62699622对比论证—同类今夕对比

Nowadays, the ability to cooperate is more important than past.

In the past, people were principally engaged in individual activities to make a living, where cooperation is less important. However, in modern world, people’s daily work has become more intertwined with one another, where cooperation is playing an increasingly essential role both in people’s daily life and their routine work.

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三、词汇的延伸

小马托福 010-62699622因为、由于

for/ as/ since/ because

result from( 前果后因 ) / result in( 前因后果 )/as a result of

due to/ owing to/ thanks to

give rise to/ lead to

The bad quality of air resulted from the accumulation of

automobile exhaust.

小马托福 010-62699622认为

认为 Think

consider /believe/claim/assume /maintain

I think/claim/assume /maintain Tom is a great guy.

The lecturer considers that global warming is a serious

problem.

I believe that the best way to relax is to watch a movie.

小马托福 010-62699622认为

As far as I am concerned

As far as I am concerned, education is about influencing people.

From my point of view

From my point of view, every coin has two sides.

From my perspective

From my perspective, television has destroyed the communication among friends and families.

I hold the idea/opinion that

小马托福 010-62699622好的

Nothing is impossible for a willing heart.

好的 good

excellent/ fantastic/ amazing /superb （极好的） / exceptional

( 超凡的 ) /fabulous/ remarkable ( 卓越的 )

People gasped with admiration at the superb skills of the

gymnast.

Bill Gates is an exceptional businessman throughout the

world.

小马托福 010-62699622成功的

成功的 successful

Prosperous( 繁荣的 )/ triumphant/ promising/ thriving

Malaysia is a peaceful nation whose increasingly

prosperous citizens are well-educated and widely traveled.

He made a triumphant return to New York in 1937, playing

at several clubs and appearing on national radio shows.

小马托福 010-62699622坏的

坏的，糟糕的 bad

improper （不合适的 )/ serious( 危急的 )/ terrible （很糟的 )/

awful （可怕的）Automobile exhaust has created a serious environmental

problem.

小马托福 010-62699622重要的

重要的 important

Significant/ critical / vital/ crucial /imperative/

indispensable/ essential

It is imperative that he act as naturally as possible.

Daily exercise is very crucial for your health.

小马托福 010-62699622很多

Nothing is impossible for a willing heart.

修饰可数名词 修饰不可数名词 通用型•Many •Much •A lot of/ lots of •A great many •A good deal of •Plenty of•A large number of

•A large amount of

•An abundance of

•A series of •Abundant

•A(n) sea/ocean of

小马托福 010-62699622“ 很多”例句哦

There are a great many demonstrators on the Times Square.

There is plenty of topics to be talked about.

We can make use of an abundance of resources.

An ocean of factors need to be taken into consideration.

小马托福 010-62699622改善 / 提高

ameliorate/ improve/ enhance/ better

He drudges daily with no hope of bettering himself.

We followed a policy aimed at improving the lot of the poorest

areas.

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四、句子的拓展

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Thank you very much!

吕欣泽

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