TERM PAPER - SOEST · TERM PAPER •TOPIC due week of February 13thin lab •SUBMIT TO ME BY EMAIL...
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TERMPAPER
• 5pagesdoublespaced• Atleast4acceptablereferences• ANYOCEANRELATEDTOPIC!!!!!
http://www.marinelifephotography.com/fishes/angelfishes/centropyge-potteri.htm
Potter'sAngelfishCentropyge potteri
TERMPAPER
• TOPICdueweekofFebruary13th inlab• SUBMITTOMEBYEMAILBEFORELABTHATDAY• ThesisstatementandATLEAST3HIGHLEVEL REFERENCES
• ROUGHDRAFTdueweekofMarch13thinlabanddigitalcopybyemail• FINALDRAFTdueandPRESENTATIONweekofApril24th inlabanddigitalcopybyemail
http://www.marinelifephotography.com/fishes/blennies/entomacrodus-marmoratus.htm
MarbledBlennyEntomacrodus marmoratus
TERMPAPER
• Demonstratethatyoucan:• Selecttrustworthysources• Buildanargument/takeastanceonatopic• Writeaproperlyformattedpaperwith:• PROPERCITATIONS• CORRECTGRAMMAR• FORMALLANGUAGE• GOODORGANIZATION
http://hawaiinaturejournal.weebly.com/uploads/2/0/8/3/20833844/3365227_orig.jpg
ZebraBlennyIstiblennius zebraPAO’O
TERMPAPER: GENERALSTRUCTURE
Startwithanoutline:
• IncludeyourName&Date• PaperTitle• Introduction• SupportingParagraphs• Concludingstatement• References
http://www.marinelifephotography.com/marine/echinoderms/urchins/colobocentrotus-atratus.htm
HelmeturchinColobocentrotus atratus
TERMPAPER: INTRODUCTION
• Introducethemaintopic• Backgroundaboutthetopic• Thesisstatement• Whatareyouarguing?Orwhatisyourquestion?
• Thisisthelastsentenceofyourintroduction
*Theintroductionsetsupthesupportingparagraphs
TERMPAPER: SUPPORTINGPARAGRAPHS
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• Supportingparagraphs(3+)• Startwithatopicsentencethatsummarizeswhatthatparagraphwillbeaboutandconnectsittothethesis• Focusedonatopicsurroundingyourmaintopic:forexampleifyourpaperisaboutopenoceanfishfarms:• Whatdotheydointhesefarms?• Whyarefishfarmsimportant?• Wheredoesfishfarmingoccur?• Whatistheproblemwithwhattheydo?
TERMPAPER: CONCLUDINGPARAGRAPH• Refreshthereaderonyourmainpointsandthesis(firstsentenceofconclusionisyourthesisstatement)• Whatarethetake-aways• Whataretheimplicationsforthefuture• ConcludingSentence• e.g.“Fishfarmingclearlyisayoungbusinessandhasmuchneedforimprovement,butisanecessarypracticeforthefutureproteinneedsoftheworld.
TERMPAPER: GENERALSTRUCTURE
Startwithanoutline:• IncludeyourName&Date• PaperTitle• Introduction• SupportingParagraphs• Concludingstatement• References– in-textcitationsandreferenceslist(APAstyle)
http://www.marinelifephotography.com/marine/echinoderms/urchins/colobocentrotus-atratus.htm
HelmeturchinColobocentrotus atratus
TERMPAPER- WHERETOFINDINFORMATION• UNACCEPTABLEReferences:
• Wikipedia,NationalGeographic,WorldWildlifeFund,Youtube,SaveTheWhales.org,FoxNewsorMSNBC(oranynightlynewstype),PersonalBlogsites
• ACCEPTABLEReferences(3levels):• Lowlevel:Scienceoreducationalwebsitesthatcitetheprimaryliterature(=ScientificJournalArticles)• e.g.ScienceDaily,anything.edu
• Midlevel:GovernmentRecordsandWebsites(NOAA.gov,EPA.gov,NASA.gov,other .gov)
• Highlevel:ScientificJournals,PublishedTextbooks,ConferenceProceedings(atleast3ofthe4)
http://www.marinelifephotography.com/fishes/filefishes/pervagor-spilosoma.htm
FantailedFilefishPervagor spilosoma'ō'ili 'uwi 'uwi
WHATISASCIENTIFICJOURNALARTICLE?
1. Anewcontributiontoknowledgethatascientistworkedveryhardtoproduceandsharewiththeworld
2. ORareview-synthesisofexistingknowledgeonatopic• similartoyourpaper
• Notallofourworkgetspublished• whatdoesgetpublishedisusuallyPeer-reviewed
http://www.marinelifephotography.com/fishes/filefishes/pervagor-spilosoma.htm
SeaslugCaloria sp.
HOWTOFINDANACCEPTABLEREFERENCE?• CanSTART withWikipediaorGooglesearchtofindjournalarticles• UseGoogleScholarorWebofScience(throughUHMlibrary)• Keywordsareimportant!Cangetyouverydifferentresults.• Broadv.s.Specific:Chemicals,fish,waterV.S.Mercury,tuna,ocean
• Howtoknowifitisacceptable...• The4referencesmustatleastcitetheprimaryliteratureORbeagovernmentor.edu website• .gov websitesdon’toftenmaketheirsourcesclearbutinformationisprovidedbyexpertsinthefield
HOWNOTTOPLAGIARIZEAREFERENCE• ExamplePapertopic:Mercuryinmarinefoodwebs• Paragraph1topic:Backgroundinformation• Exampleresource:(1)http://oehha.ca.gov/fish/hg/index.html• “Mercuryisanaturalelementfoundinrocks,coal,andsoil”(1).
Donotcopyandpaste!Evenifyouthinkthat’sthebestwaytosayit.• 5wordsinarowthatareidenticalistechnicallyplagiarism….SO:• Thinkaboutwhatyouaretryingtosayandhowyouwouldtalkaboutit,thenrewriteitinyourownwords
• Not-plagiarizing:“Mercurynaturallyoccursinrocks,soilandcoal(1)anditgetsintothecoastaloceanprimarilythroughfreshwaterrunofffromland(2)....”
MICHELLEOBAMA'SSPEECH(2008)'AndBarackandIwereraisedwithsomanyofthesamevalues:thatyouworkhardforwhatyouwantinlife;thatyourwordisyourbondandyoudowhatyousay you'regoingtodo;thatyoutreatpeoplewithdignityandrespect,evenifyoudon'tknowthem,andevenifyoudon'tagreewiththem.'AndBarackandIsetouttobuildlivesguidedbythesevalues,andpassthemontothenextgeneration.'Becausewewantourchildren– andallchildreninthisnation– toknowthattheonlylimittotheheightofyourachievementsisthereachofyourdreamsandyourwillingnesstoworkforthem.'
Readmore:http://www.dailymail.co.uk/news/article-3699830/Trump-employee-admits-plagiarized-Michelle-Obama-Melania-s-speech-feels-terrible-chaos-Donald-REFUSED-accept-resignation.html#ixzz4I2bpZsUl
MELANIATRUMP'SSPEECH(2016)'Myparentsimpressedonmethevaluesthatyouworkhardforwhatyouwantinlife.'Thatyourwordisyourbondandyoudowhatyousayandkeepyourpromise,thatyoutreatpeoplewithrespect.Theytaughtandshowedmevaluesandmoralsintheirdailylives.'ThatisalessonthatIcontinuetopassalongtoourson.Andweneedtopassthoselessonsontothemanygenerationstofollow. Becausewewantourchildreninthisnationtoknowthattheonlylimittoyourachievementsisthestrengthofyourdreamsandyourwillingnesstoworkforthem.'
RESOURCESFORYOU• NeverwrittenaResearchPaperbefore?• PurdueUniversityOnlineWritingLab:Writingaresearchpaper
• UHManoaLibraries,librarywebsite
• HamiltonLibrary
• SinclairLibrary
• TheWritingCenter
• offerswritingconsultationsfreeofcharge
• Open9-5daily PurpleGorgonianEugorgia rubens
http://www.marinelifephotography.com/marine/cnidaria/eugorgia-rubens.htm