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    McPherson College

    SPECTATOR

    Staff Manual and Stylesheet

    I. Spectator Mission

    Publisher

    The mission of the McPherson College Spectator is

    twofold: 1) To serve and enhance the campus

    community by providing an informed and responsible

    forum for campus news and student voices and 2) To

    provide an experience where students can learn about

    the civic role of journalism and practice the range of

    skills required of professional journalists.

    The vision for the Spectator is to manifest in its

    journalistic practices the nine elements of journalism

    identified by Bill Kovach and Tom Rosenstiel in theirlandmark work, The Elements of Journalism (Three

    Rivers Press, 2001). The Spectator is fulfilling both

    parts of its statement of mission when the following

    statements are true:

    The Spectators first obligation is to the truth.

    Its first loyalty is to students and members of the

    campus community.

    Staff members practice a discipline of

    verification.

    Staff members maintain an independence from

    those they cover.

    The Spectator remains an independent monitorof power.

    It must provide a public forum for criticism and

    compromise.

    It makes the significant interesting and relevant.

    Reporting is comprehensive and proportional.

    Staff members are allowed to exercise their

    personal conscience.

    II. Organizational Structure

    Publisher

    The Spectator is published by the Student Govern-

    ment Association of McPherson College. Its policies

    are determined by the Board of Publications. Modest

    salaries are paid to the editor-in-chief, page editors,

    advertising sales manager, advertising design and

    layout manager, and business manager, all of whom

    are the employees of SGA. In addition, reporters and

    photographers are compensated on a per-story/

    photograph basis.

    Editorial Staff

    The Editorial Staff is the decision-making body of The

    Spectator. Members include all salaried editors, the

    business manager, the advertising managers, and the

    faculty adviser (without vote).

    Salaried staff are subject to review by the Editorial

    Board if they fail to perform their duties. By majority

    vote, the Editorial Staff may recommend to the Board

    of Publications the dismissal of any salaried staff

    member. The staff is responsible for recommending a

    replacement for a vacated position.

    When questions concerning the publication ofcontroversial material, the coverage of sensitive stories

    or the editorial position in the lead editorial box arise, a

    majority vote of the Editorial Staff will be the deciding

    factor. The faculty adviser may veto the decision, but

    the team may overrule the adviser with a unanimous

    vote.

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    Staff Organization

    Editor-in-Chief

    The editor-in-chief is the administrative head of the

    Spectator staff. He or she is responsible for

    managing the Spectator office space all communication regarding staff meetings

    planning and conducting staff meetings

    handling concerns of reporters, photographers,

    and page editors about matters that affect the

    satisfactory and timely production of the paper.

    The editor-in-chief works closely with section editors,

    the copy editor, the photography editor, the online

    coordinator and the multimedia editor in all phases of

    paper and online production, including

    planning stories to be covered for each issue

    assigning writers, photographers, and

    multimedia journalists to specific stories editing copy

    designing pages

    selecting and cropping photos

    writing headlines and cutlines

    submitting the final publication to the printer

    transferring news to the online Spectator

    offering suggestions and feedback on

    multimedia productions.

    The editor-in-chief carries the authority to make final

    decisions concerning the acceptability of any

    component of the Spectator. The editor-in-chief may

    but is not required toconsult the faculty adviser ondifficult or controversial decisions.

    It is assumed that the editor-in-chief will frequently

    contribute writing to the Spectator, especially in the

    areas of news analysis and opinion (although personal

    interest can dictate the kind of writing contributed).

    In addition, the editor-in-chief oversees the business

    aspects of the Spectator. He or she

    works with the advertising sales manager to

    ensure the sale of adequate ads for each issue

    works with the advertising design manager to

    ensure the appropriate and timely completion ofads for each issue

    works with the business manager to ensure

    financial records are accurately maintained,

    subscriptions promptly filled and accounts

    professionally handled.

    Copy Editor

    Working cooperatively with the editor-in-chief and the

    section editors, the copy editor works to see that the

    Spectator is as factually accurate and conventionally

    correct as possible. His or her responsibilities include

    seeing that copy conforms to the house styleoutlined in this stylesheet

    seeing that copy conforms to Associated Press

    style in all matters not covered in this stylesheet

    correcting all errors of spelling, grammar, usage,

    punctuation and other conventions of standard

    English

    Checking all questionable statements or figures

    and double checking spelling of names,

    improving leads, tightening sentences and

    improving copy flow, especially in news and

    sports stories

    Tightening sentences and improving copy flow,

    but without eliminating the personal voice incolumns and feature stories

    When possible, reviewing page proofs to

    proofread cutlines, headlines, briefs or other

    copy that might have been introduced on the

    page without going through the usual copy

    editing workflow.

    Section Editors

    The Spectator staff includes four section editors: the

    news editor, opinions editor, campus life editor and

    sports editor. Section editors carry lead responsibility

    for two pages per issue, including:

    planning stories and photos for their section

    assigning reporters to stories

    copy-editing stories

    designing pages

    writing headlines and cutlines

    producing pages in Adobe InDesign

    consulting with the photography editor

    concerning photo assignments and sizes for

    planned layout.

    It is also assumed that section editors will occasionally

    contribute articles to their pages.

    Section editors, in consultation with the editor-in-chief,

    decide the acceptability of any components of their

    pages, but final authority and responsibility lie with the

    editor-in-chief (in consultation as requested with the

    faculty adviser).

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    Photography Editor

    The photography editor has responsibility for all

    aspects of producing photographs for the Spectator,

    including

    managing all aspects of the photography

    equipment owned by the Spectator planning photo shoots in consultation with the

    section editors

    giving photographers assignments

    taking photos

    developing film

    cropping photos

    digitally editing and preparing photos for print.

    Advertising Sales Manager

    The ad sales manager is the Spectator's

    representative in the McPherson business community.

    He or she is responsible for soliciting enough

    advertising to keep the Spectators agency account

    solvent. Responsibilities include

    distributing display advertising contracts at the

    beginning of each semester to all potential

    advertisers, either in person or by mail

    soliciting the required quota of advertising for

    each issue through contracts and periodic sales

    calls

    clearly and effectively communicating ad-

    vertisers' ideas and needs for display ads

    accurately and on time to the advertising design

    and layout manager

    providing advertisers with proofs, as requested.

    Advertising Design and Layout Manager

    The ad design and layout manager, in consultation

    with the editor-in-chief and the faculty adviser, carries

    creative control over all Spectator advertising. His or

    her major responsibilities include

    meeting the requests of advertisers for their

    display ads

    preparing proofs of ads as requested for

    advertisers to approve before publication

    planning with the ad sales manager and the

    photography editor the photos needed forupcoming display ads

    preparing digital files ready for placement on

    desktop publisher pages and transferring those

    ads to the editor-in-chief.

    Business Manager

    The business manager cares for the financial records

    and all business matters of the Spectator except for

    the sale of advertisements. The major responsibilities

    are

    caring for all matters related to subscriptions,

    including selling and billing subscribers and

    labeling and mailing subscribers' papers

    billing advertisers and collecting on bills

    receiving bills and submitting them to the college

    Business Office for payment

    keeping the books

    maintaining records of writers' and

    photographers' strings for payment

    requesting string payments from the college

    Business Office

    Staff Writers and Photographers

    Staff reporters and photographers are extremely

    important and fully accountable members of the

    Spectator staff. Their writing load may vary from issue

    to issue (and depending upon whether they areenrolled for academic credit). Some flexibility in

    assignments is possible when arrangements are

    appropriately made in advance with section editors

    and/or the editor-in-chief. Editors will try to give staff

    members the types of assignments they prefer;

    however, both reporters and photographers can

    expect to receive a wide range of assignments.

    Whether or not they are enrolled for credit, staff

    reporters and photographers are expected to

    Attend all staff meetings

    Satisfactorily complete stories or photo shoots

    by the assigned deadline Satisfactorily cover any assigned beats

    Follow the Spectator Stylesheet and AP

    Stylebook

    Prepare copy in the manner prescribed in this

    manual.

    Staff members who are enrolled in an EN 315

    Journalism Practicum must confer with the faculty

    adviser about additional requirements.

    Publication Adviser

    The faculty adviser for the Spectator is an educator

    appointed by the dean of the faculty in cooperationwith the Department of English. Her role is to provide

    an ethical, encouraging environment where students

    learn and practice sound journalistic principles.

    One way advisers fulfill their educational responsibility

    is by serving as a resource that students can consult.

    This advisory role, however, is precarious because it

    can easily conflict with students right to free

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    expression. The student press carries all the rights,

    privileges, and responsibilities granted by the First

    Amendment, and prior review is unconstitutional. The

    critical factor here is that the students must initiate the

    dialogue; an adviser may offer suggestions when her

    input is overtly sought.

    The adviser must teach without censoring, editing,

    designing, directing or producing. Thus, a prickly

    reality in student journalism is that much of the

    learning derives from lessons learned from mistakes.

    This is uncomfortable because journalism is a

    relatively unforgiving profession and news readers are

    unforgiving consumers. It is these same high ex-

    pectations, however, that make post-publication

    learning experiences so effective. Publication critiques

    are another way advisers meet their obligations as

    educators.

    A more detailed discussion of the advisers role can be

    found at College Media Advisers Code of Ethics(http://www.collegemedia.org).

    Spectator Office

    The Spectator office is located in Beeghly Hall 204 at

    the far south end of the second-floor hallway. The

    office is locked, but keys are issued to each editor and

    manager. Reporters who need access to the

    Spectator office may contact any of the paid-position

    staff.

    The editor-in-chief is in charge of the office, and

    editors and reporters and other staff members share in

    the responsibility of keeping the office a productiveplace to work.

    The Spectator and Academic Credit

    Students may receive one hour of academic credit per

    semester for their work on the Spectator. Students

    who desire credit may enroll for any of the EN 315

    journalism practica, which include reporting, editing,

    design and layout, advertising management, and

    photojournalism. Students enrolled for credit have

    slightly more stringent requirements than those

    outlined in this manual. For additional expectations,

    see the practica syllabi.

    III. Staff Manual

    What Is News?

    News is a fresh report of events, facts or others

    opinions that is important or helpful for readers toknow.

    News Has Impact and Relevance

    Probably the biggest problem faced by the staff of a bi-

    weekly paper is providing its readers the fresh reports.

    A staff can employ two tactics to fight this problem:

    Load the issue with advances instead of reports

    about past events. Students already know about

    what last weeks Mohler said. They can be truly

    informed, however, by an article about next

    week's Religious Heritage lecturer and perhaps

    have their interest piqued enough to lookforward to the speech.

    Assess past events or actions to determine their

    current or future impact. Then, feature this

    impact prominently in the story's lead. Compare

    the following leads, for example:

    Miller Library installed new software for its on-

    line catalog over the summer. The system was

    installed during the final weeks of August and

    was up and running by the time classes started

    on Aug. 28.

    Library staff and returning students are praisingthe new, user-friendly software they are now

    using to access the librarys on-line catalog.

    "Students really seem to appreciate the

    faster search returns and the new look, said

    Susan Taylor, director of library services, earlier

    this week. The screen is now a professional-

    looking interface that is much easier to use than

    the old system, she said.

    Last year, I felt like I was trying to use a

    system that was way outdated, said Riley

    Miller, sr., Rocky Ford, Colo. This looks and

    feels like the best search engines on the Web.

    That is the news--the fresh report that

    emphasizes the impact for our readership.

    Sports stories are especially susceptible to

    recounting outdated events. Unless a recent

    game was a victory or loss of particular

    importance, leads in sports stories should

    usually feature the upcoming match(es) or the

    next game of real magnitude.

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    News Is Accurate and Unbiased

    No obligations of the journalist are more important

    than accuracy and truth telling. Every staff member

    bears responsibility for seeing that information printed

    in the Spectator is correct and fairly represents the

    truth.

    The following practices constitute a discipline of

    verification that can assure the most accurate stories

    possible.

    Confirm with sources any quotation that is

    controversial or about which there is any

    question of accuracy.

    Double-check copy against documentary

    information; or, when documentary evidence

    does not exist, confirm facts with two

    independent sources.

    Strive to get all sides of an issue, no matter how

    difficult or controversial. Dont cover events or activities that you are

    involved in. (For example, an SGA member

    shouldnt cover a story about SGA.)

    Avoid quoting friends. Make every effort to

    interview those who rarely if ever appear in the

    Spectator.

    Guidelines for Writers

    Responsibility to Staff

    Nothingabsolutely nothingis more critical to the

    success and morale of a news organization than staff

    writers who will do what it takes to get a good storyand turn it in by deadline. Conversely, nothing

    demoralizes a staff more than writers who fail to do

    justice to the assignment and who submit copy late.

    Editors pay a huge emotional and physical price for

    the irresponsibility of others.

    Reporters must do whatever is necessary to get a

    story rightinterview people they dont know, make

    phone calls at nights or on weekends, revise copy

    more times than they want, and practice the discipline

    of verification described above. You will not only make

    your editors happy; you will make yourself happy. You

    can be satisfied with a job well done and reap theappreciation of your subjects and your readers.

    Interviewing

    Interviews are an essential part of getting any story,

    and your interviewing skills will have a direct influence

    on the quality of your reporting. While interviewing

    subjects face-to-face is more desirable, do not forget

    that the telephone is a quick way to get accurate

    information for stories. Many subjects will respond to

    email questions, but that should be reporters last

    resort: the quotes you get will be more carefully

    worded, more canned, and crafted to avoid giving

    real answers to your questions. But perhaps the

    biggest drawback of an email interview is that you are

    less likely to get answers to the follow-up questionsthat naturally evolve in a face-to-face or telephone

    interview.

    It is important to follow the guidelines below when you

    interview persons:

    By telephone:

    Be sure you know what you want to ask before

    you call. Make a list. Talk from notes if this will

    help.

    Be sure you identify yourself in a business-like

    way to whoever answers. Tell them what you

    are doing, and what you want:Hello, my name is Laurina Hannan, and I'm

    writing an article for the McPherson College

    Spectator on the college's fall enrollment

    figures. While I have the numbers, I need some

    information on how these numbers compare to

    previous years. I'd like to talk to Karlene Tyler

    about this. Is she in?

    Even if your deadline is urgent, respect your

    subjects time and ask them,

    Is this a good time to talkor could I call

    back/could we make an appointment for a better

    time?

    Then get that appointment for a better time, right

    then.

    In person:

    Write your questions in a notebook to be used

    especially for interviewing. You might write one

    question at the top of a blank page and then

    write answers below.

    When interviewing feature story subjects,

    especially, be aware of unspoken information.

    Keep notes on your subjects appearance and

    mannerisms and on the interview setting. Be open about taking notes. The subject wants

    your piece to be correct. If you wish to record the

    interview, ask your subjects permission. Do not

    assume they are comfortable with being

    recorded. It is illegal to record an interview

    secretly

    If there is something you do not understand, ask

    for an explanation.

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    Do not rush from question to question. If you

    pause deliberately, your subject may continue to

    talk, providing you with your best information

    and best quotes.

    End every interview with the question, "Is there

    anything I didn't ask that I should have?" You will

    be surprised at what this can elicit, and it givesthe subject the feeling that you have been

    thorough.

    Off-the-Record: What Does It Mean?

    If anyone ever makes a comment in an interview with

    the request that it be "off the record," STOP the

    interview and find out what your source means. Does

    she mean:

    Your source never wants to see that comment

    or information in print?

    You can report the information if you can keep

    the source's identity out of the story?Once you give your word the material will be "off the

    record," you must keep your promise.

    Never accept information off the record when it

    belongs on the record. Remarks made at a public

    meeting such as Student Government, for example,

    are always on the record.

    As a policy, the Spectator does not publish

    unattributed quotes or information (except in the

    Shout It Out column). If the source asks to remain

    anonymous, explain that you cannot report information

    that cant be attributed to a named source.

    Avoiding Libel

    Here are some general rules about libel:

    You may not damage a person's reputation

    without the risk of paying the consequences.

    You may be sued if you subject a person to

    public scorn, ridicule, or opprobrium.

    You may be sued if you harm persons in their

    trade, occupation, or profession.

    It is not necessary to name persons for readers

    to be able to identify them. If readers can identify

    the person you are writing about and your

    statements harm her reputation, they arelibelous even though you never used her name.

    Exception: Criticism of the arts (plays, movies,

    books, CDs, exhibits, etc.) is immune, as long as

    it is fair, based on fact, and contains no malice,

    and as long as it limits itself to the work, rather

    than criticizes the man or woman who created

    the work.

    See the "Libel Manual" in The Associated Press

    Stylebookand Libel Manual for a complete treatment

    of libel.

    Covering Beats

    Many if not most staff members will be assigned

    beats. Beats may change from semester-to-semester,but important beats will generally remain the same.

    They include

    Presidents Office

    Provost/Academic Dean

    Advancement

    Business Office

    Admissions

    Facility Management

    Campus Ministry/

    Counseling

    Faculty

    Student Government

    Student Activities Board

    Theatre

    Auto Restoration

    Music

    Business Club

    Student Services

    Creative Arts Society

    Friendship Art Exhibits

    Once you have been assigned a beat, find out all youcan about it.

    Go to the source of information suggested,

    introduce yourself, and tell that person you have

    his/her beat for the semester and want to know

    all you can about their functions. Learn whos in

    this office/department. (Secretaries are often the

    best sources of information.)

    Get any handbooks or information that office

    puts out. Ask to be put on the distribution list

    for agendas, minutes, announcements, or

    policies that the office produces.

    Find out the best time to talk with the sourcesand touch base with them at that time on a

    regular basisperhaps during the week after

    publication of an issue of the Spec.

    Discuss any potential stories with your section

    editor or the editor-in-chief to confirm that you

    should pursue the story or that it should be

    assigned to another staff writer.

    Preparing Copy

    Reporters should prepare copy on a word processor,

    preferably Microsoft Word. If you are using some

    word processor other than Word, save your work as

    an RTF file. (Every word processor has an RTF, or

    Rich Text Format, mode.)

    Reporters may submit stories to their section editor as

    an email attachment. Keep a backup copy of the file in

    case it becomes corrupted in the process of being

    forwarded to the editor.

    Please follow these guidelines in preparing copy:

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    At the top your story, type a two- to four-word

    slug that indicates the content of your story.

    Under the slug, type your name exactly as you

    want it to appear in your byline. (Page editors

    and the editor-in-chief make the final

    determination on whether the byline appears

    with the story.) Turn on double-spacing. (Its easier for you and

    your editor to proofread.)

    Keep paragraphs short. Journalistic paragraphs

    average two sentences and almost never

    exceed three sentences.

    Do not split (hyphenate) words at the ends of

    lines. If your word processor automatically

    divides words, disable the feature.

    Omit commas before the conjunction in a series

    of three or more sentence elements.

    Do not use tabs to indent paragraphs. Editors

    must strip them out before placing them into the

    desktop publisher. This consumes precious timeduring production and introduces errors.

    Space only once after periods at the end of

    sentences. Extra spaces must also be stripped

    from copy by editors.

    On matters of style, writers should be guided first

    by this stylesheet (see section IV) and second

    by theAP Stylebook.

    Meet all deadlines, or explain to your editor 48

    hours in advance why your deadline will not be

    met.

    Writing Straight News

    The inverted pyramid is the basic design for most

    straight news stories. The most important facts are

    blurted out in the first paragraph (the lead), and the

    reporter works his way down to and through the least

    important information.

    The purpose of the inverted pyramid is to put the facts

    in order of decreasing importance. Thus, if the reader

    reads only the first few paragraphs of a story, chances

    are she has read the most important parts of the story.

    The inverted pyramid is also a tool for your page

    editors. Occasionally, they will have to cut copy as

    they design their pages. When reporters effectivelyuse the inverted pyramid, page editors can cut the last

    paragraphs of a story, knowing these are the least

    important parts of a report.

    News writing consists of the five Ws and the H:

    WHO, WHAT, WHEN, WHERE, WHY, HOW

    Each news story must answer as many of the five Ws

    and the H as possible.

    Newswriting is lead writing. The lead is not only the

    first paragraph of a news story, it is the essence of

    what you know about that event, written crisply and

    tightly.

    There are always several good ways to write a lead,

    but usually one best way for each storythe way that

    gets the most interesting or the most important news

    into the first few words of the lead. (See the entry

    underleads in the stylesheet.)

    Writing Features

    What is a feature story? Whatever works. Many

    features are based on dramatic situations, such as the

    football player with the career-ending injury. Others are

    based on the unique, such as the student with a pet

    boa constrictor in his dorm room. Others are based on

    overlooked, common occurrences, such as cleaning

    the bathrooms in the dorms, students who go home on

    weekends, etc.There is no feature "formula," as there is in straight

    news writing (and, to a lesser extent, editorial writing).

    A feature is a longer article, usually 500 words or

    more, that tells the facts truthfully, but in which the

    story is in the telling as much as in the facts.

    The greatest danger in a feature is that its emphasis

    upon the way the story is written will lead the writer to

    use florid phrases, clichs and generalities.

    The success of a feature depends upon the quality of

    information gathered; attention to word choices;

    understated, detailed descriptions and anecdotes;

    and, an organization of materials that effectively

    moves the reader to an informed viewpoint about the

    subject.

    Writing Editorials

    An editorial is a brief essay, usually 300 words or less,

    expressing a carefully reasoned position or opinion on

    a recent issue. Ideally, a Spectator editorial will inform

    and lead student opinion. It will interpret current

    campus news to students and point out its

    significance. Editorialists can take at least four different

    approaches: teaching, attacking, defending, or

    praising.

    In its most basic form, the editorial follows a rather

    predictable pattern.

    The editorial writer first establishes the news

    peg, that is, the timely information or issue on

    which the editorial is based. The problem or

    situation posed by the news peg is explained,

    and the writer's position clearly stated.

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    An analysis of the situation follows, examining

    the facts and details in a way that reveals the

    reasoning behind the editorialist's opinion.

    The editorial usually re-emphasizes the writer's

    position and then offers a solution, backed with

    arguments suggesting the rightness of the

    solution. The editorial always ends with a strong

    statementoften the strongest statement in the

    piece.

    Editorials need not always be serious. With a

    lighter touch, one can entertain at the same time

    he or she teaches, criticizes, praises, or defends.

    Letters to the Editor Policy

    The Spectator's editorial pages provide a public forum

    for student opinion. Through letters to the editor,

    students may air concerns, opinions, and suggestions.

    The following policy guides the publication of all lettersto the editor and should be printed in full in the first

    issue of each semester.

    All letters will be handled by the editors.

    The Spectator does not publish letters to which

    authors will not attach their names except in the

    extraordinary circumstances where the writers

    safety or privacy is endangered.

    Editors reserve the right to edit letters to correct

    inaccuracies, excessive wordiness, unnecessary

    vulgarity or poor taste, and potentially libelous

    statements. If changes of any consequence are

    made, editors will notify the writer to see if he or

    she prefers to withdraw the letter.

    Letters to the editor may be attached in e-mail to

    [email protected] or dropped

    in campus mail addressed to the Spec. The final

    deadline is Monday before the Fridays on which

    a paper is published.

    As a matter of practice, the opinions editor or the

    editor-in-chief must confirm the authorship of all letters

    submitted for publication.

    IV. Stylesheet

    Spectator staff members should always refer first to

    the guidelines in this stylesheet. If the relevant

    guidelines are not listed here, defer to the AP

    Stylebook. Entries followed by [AP] are fully consistentwith AP style. All others entries represent guidelines

    unique to the Spectator.

    abbreviations, organizations On first reference,

    use an organization's full name. Do not follow it

    with an abbreviation or acronym in parentheses or

    set off by dashes. If an abbreviation or acronym is

    not clear on second reference, do not use it.

    abbreviations, classes In student identifications

    (see identification, student entry), use the

    abbreviations fr., soph., jr. and sr. In all other

    situations, spell them out.

    See also entries underdays of the week, months,

    states, Student Council, times, titles

    attributions Always clearly identify the source of

    quotations (and paraphrased quotations) in your

    copy. In general, the verb said is the best verb of

    attribution. It is not weakened by repetition. In

    straight news stories, be especially careful that

    synonyms of attribution such as admitted,

    disclosed, conceded, offered, explained, etc., do

    not give a quotation an editorial tone.

    As a rule, attributions should follow quotes or

    paraphrases and be in subject-verb order;however, in the case of first-reference sources that

    require an identifying appositive, the attribution is

    best in verb-subject order. On first reference, for

    example,

    "Students really seem to appreciate the faster

    search returns and the new look, said Susan

    Taylor, director of library services.

    But on second reference,

    "Students really seem to appreciate the faster

    search returns and the new look, Taylor said.

    When quotes exceed a single sentence in length,attributions should be placed at the end of the first

    sentence:

    Last year, I felt like I was trying to use a system

    that was way outdated, said Riley Miller, sr., Rocky

    Ford, Colo. This looks and feels like the best

    search engines on the Web.

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    buildings In the first reference, use the campus

    building's full name. (Exception: Center for Sport

    and Physical Education, which may be referred to

    as the Sport Centeron first reference.)

    On second reference, Hallmay be properly dropped

    from a name, or a building may be referred to

    generically, for example, the union or SU, the

    gazebo, the stadium. The correct first references and

    spellings of campus buildings are

    Beeghly Hall

    Bittinger Hall

    Brown Auditorium

    Dotzour Hall

    Heaston Gazebo

    Hess Fine Arts Center

    Hoffman Student Union

    McPherson Stadium

    Melhorn Science Hall

    Metzler HallMiller Library

    Mingenback Mall

    Mingenback Theatre

    Mohler Hall

    Morrison Hall

    Sport Center

    Templeton Hall

    Coach / coach Coach is frequently used in sports

    stories as a courtesy title before the names of

    persons who direct athletic teams. In such cases it

    is capitalized: Coach Joe Betasso, Coach

    Swartzendruber, Coach Rolfs.

    Do not capitalize coach when it is modified in any

    way or set off from a name by commas: defensive

    coach Mike Silva; the coach, Cy Rolfs, was

    charged with a technical foul.

    In stories not on the sports pages, college

    personnel who are coaches should be referred by

    their academic titles. See the entry identification,

    faculty & staff.

    college When referring to McPherson College

    generically, use the college with lowercase "c."

    commas Omit the comma before and or or in aseries. For example,

    The Spectator lab includes eight computer stations,

    two scanners and a large-format printer.

    Use commas around years only a month and date

    are given, for example, on Feb. 12, 2005, SGA;

    but, in February 1955, SGA.

    See the entry commas in the AP Stylebookfor

    additional help.

    course titles See titles, course

    cutlines In general, write the first sentence of a

    cutline in present tense. Write all other sentences in

    the past tense.

    If student subjects in a photograph are identified in

    an accompanying story, class and hometown

    identification is not needed. However, follow the

    identification style for students outlined in the entry

    identification, students if they are not identified

    elsewhere.

    days of the week [AP] Capitalize them. Do not

    abbreviate, except in tabular format. See also time

    elements.

    full-time Hyphenate it.

    headlines In general, news story headlines shouldcontain a verb. Use the present tense for headlines

    about past events. Avoid splitting a phrase or idea

    between lines on multiple line headlines. Feature

    story heads (and some soft news stories packaged

    in "display") need not necessarily contain verbs.

    The Spectator's headline style is down; that is, all

    words except the first word in the headline and

    proper nouns begin with a lower case letter, not a

    capital letter.

    Homecoming / homecoming Capitalize it when

    used in conjunction with a specific year, e.g.,

    Homecoming 2011. Otherwise, use lowercase.

    identification, faculty & staff On the first or second

    reference to a faculty or staff member, identify them

    by the job title listed in the annual academic catalog

    or the online faculty/staff directory.

    Ed Barr, assistant professor of technology, said

    and

    Tim Bruton, senior maintenance and safety

    technician, said

    On all references after fully identifying the faculty or

    staff member, use the last name only. Do not insertcourtesy titles such as Dr., Prof., Ms., etc.

    identification, students On the first or second

    reference to a McPherson College student, identify

    students by class and hometown. Abbreviate the

    class. Abbreviate the state if appropriate (see

    states entry). If the hometown is in Kansas, omit

    the state unless it is necessary to avoid confusion.

    For example,

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    John Johansen, sr., Pittsburg, Kan., claims . . .

    but

    Michelle Dalton, soph., Wichita, claims. . . .

    Exception: Do not fully identify students in sports

    stories. If it is important to identify the athlete, do so

    in an appositive phrase, for example,

    Jamie Sims, a sophomore from McPherson,

    scored the first basket.

    inclusive language Be sensitive at all times to

    gender in language. Seek to be concise and

    neutral. The greatest difficulties arise in matters of

    personal pronoun agreement with singular,

    indefinite antecedents, which have traditionally

    taken the masculine singular pronoun. For

    example,

    Each person has to face his own destiny.

    Possible solutions, in order of preference are:

    1) Change the antecendent so that it can take a

    plural, neuter pronoun:

    All persons have to face their own destiny.

    2) Rewrite the sentence to avoid the personal

    pronoun altogether:

    Each person must face the future; orEach person

    must face destiny.

    3) Alternate the use of the feminine pronoun with

    the masculine pronoun to agree with the singular,

    indefinite antecedent:

    Each person has to face her own destiny.

    4) Use he or she (orhis or her.)

    Each person has to face his or her own destiny.

    Interterm / interterm When used in conjunction with

    a specific year, capitalize it: Interterm 2007.

    Otherwise, use lowercase.

    leads Strive to make the first three or four words in a

    lead the most important words in the story. Avoid

    using dates, and times at the beginning of leads.

    Do not clutter leads with too many details. Forexample, identification of a student can wait for the

    second reference.

    McPherson College When referring to McPherson

    College generically, use the college (lowercase

    "c").

    midterm Lowercase, no hyphen.

    months [AP] Always spell months with five letters or

    less. Abbreviate Jan., Feb., Aug., Sept., Oct., Nov.

    and Dec. when used with a specific date. Spell out

    every month when used alone or with a year alone.

    When a phrase lists only a month and a year, do

    not separate the year with commas.

    newspaper name [AP] Do not place name in

    quotes. Capitalize the in a newspapers name if that is

    the way the publication prefers to be known.

    numerals [AP] In general, spell out whole numbers

    below 10, use figures or 10 and above. Thus,

    Spell out a numerals at the beginning of a

    sentence. If necessary, rewrite the sentence. There

    is one exceptiona numeral that identifies a

    calendar year.

    AP style for the use of numbers is complicated. If in

    doubt, check the numerals entry in the APStylebook.

    President / president [AP] President is Michael

    Schneider's formal title when it precedes his name

    and is capitalized. Do not capitalize it, however,

    when it follows his name. Thus

    President Michael Schneider said . . .

    but

    Michael Schneider, president of McPherson

    College, spoke about . . .

    semesters When used in conjunction with a specific

    year, capitalize fall and spring: Fall 2011, Spring

    2012. Use lowercase when the reference is

    generic: fall semester, spring semester. See also

    interterm.

    states [AP] The names of eight states are never

    abbreviated: Alaska, Hawaii, Idaho, Iowa, Maine,

    Ohio, Texas and Utah.

    Use the listed AP abbreviation in conjunction with

    the name of a city or town. The exception is cities

    or towns in Kansas that readers will not confuse

    with a town or city in another state. Thus,

    Kansas City, Kan., and Pittsburg, Kan.

    However,

    Hesston, Salina, Great Bend, etc.

    Ala. Md. N.Y.

    Ariz. Mass. Okla.

    Ark. Mich. Ore.

    Calif. Minn. Pa.

    Colo. Miss. R.I.

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    Conn. Mo. S.C.

    Del. Mont. S.D.

    Fla. Neb. Tenn.

    Ga. Nev. Vt.

    Ill. N.C. Va.

    Ind. N.D. Wash.

    Kan. N.H. W.Va.Ky. N.J. Wis.

    La. N.M. Wyo.

    Place one comma between the city and the state

    name, and another comma after the state name,

    unless ending a sentence.

    Student Government Association Spell it out in

    first reference in story. The short form is acceptable

    in headlines and on second reference.

    terms, academic See the entries for semesters

    and interterm.time elements The day a news event occurs usually

    belongs in the lead, but notat the beginning. In

    general, the best placement is as soon as possible

    after subjects and simple verbs:

    The Board of Trustees voted Thursday to begin

    construction of a new dorm next fall.

    For clarity and grace, however, the time element

    should sometimes be moved back (note that the

    second time element above follows the object) or

    preceded by on:

    The Board of Trustees postponed on Thursdaycollege plans to begin construction of a new dorm

    next year.

    In verb forms with auxiliary verbs, the time element

    usually works best between the auxiliary and the

    main verb:

    The time element should sometimes be moved

    back or preceded byon.

    Never use both the day and the date. For events

    less than one week in the past or the future, use

    the day. Do not write yesterdayortomorrow, orlast

    Mondayornext Monday. The tense of the verb willconvey past or future. For events more than one

    week in the past or future, use the date.

    times [AP] Use figures except for noon and midnight.

    Use the abbreviations a.m. andp.m. and a colon to

    separate hours from minutes: 11 a.m., 1 p.m., 3:30

    p.m. Do not use constructions with o'clock.

    Be careful to avoid redundancy in time

    expressions. For example, 7 p.m. Thursday, not 7

    p.m. Thursday evening.

    titles, academic See the entry identification,

    faculty & staff

    titles, books and compositions [AP] Usequotation marks to indicate book titles, movie titles,

    play titles, poem titles, song titles, television

    program titles, and titles of lectures, speeches and

    works of art.

    Capitalize the principal words, including

    prepositions and conjunctions of four or more

    letters.

    Exception: Do not use quotation marks around the

    word Bible or the titles of books that are primarily

    reference works. SeeAP Stylebookfor examples.

    titles, course Capitalize (without quotation marks)course titles only when they are used as proper

    nouns and match the course titles listed in the

    academic catalog or line schedule; for example,

    He enrolled in CM315A Journalism Practicum:

    Reporting.

    or

    More freshmen enroll in Principles of Biology than

    College Biology I.

    Courses or disciplines referenced generically are

    not capitalized:

    Allan Ayella, professor of biology, teaches nutrition

    and zoology.

    tomorrow, yesterday Do not use these time

    elements. Use the appropriate day of the week.

    Given our Friday publication, that means Saturday

    orThursday. See also the entry time elements.

    Partially revised 19 September 2011