Non- finite Verbs in writing非谓语动词在写作中的应用

① Using solar panels to get energy from the sun, solar cars look similar to ordinary cars, but they have several advantages. ② They produce little noise and no air pollution, which is great for the environment. In addition③ , solar cars are easy to drive and park as they are comparatively small. ④ However, not only are they much more expensive to buy than normal cars, but also they are less powerful, with a top speed of only 70 km/h. ⑤ The biggest problem is that they can only be driven about 100km before their battery needs recharging/ to be recharged.

周测基础写作范文： 句子表达有何亮点？

Teaching goal: Master the use of non-finite verbs in writing.

Important point: Three forms of non-finite verbs.

Difficult point: How to use non-finite verbs to make sentences.

Forms of non-finite verbs V-ingV-edto V

e.g. work---working---worked---to work

高考非谓语动词回顾1.( 全国Ⅰ ) The children all turned back________ (look)

at the famous actress as she entered the classroom.

2. ( 北京 ) For breakfast he only drinks juice from fresh fruit ________ (grow) on his own farm.

3. ( 上海 ) A small plane crashed into a hillside five miles east of the city ， ________ (kill) all four people on board.

4. (广东 ) Your composition is good but your handwriting still requires __________(improve).

5. (福建 ) She returned home from the office ， only ________ (find) the door open and something missing.

to look

to find

killing

improving

grown

1. Looking from the top of mountain, the

city is beautiful .

2. In my opinion, climb mountain is an

enjoyable thing.

3. —Which team is good at cooking?

—A team called itself the supper cook.

Correction

写作中非谓语动词常见的错误

1 、状语动作行为者与主句主语不一致

Looking from the top of mountain, the city is beautiful .

Looked from the top of mountain, the city is beautiful .

写作中非谓语动词常见的错误

2 、用动词原形充当主语、表语和宾语

2. In my opinion, climb mountain is an enjoyable thing.

In my opinion, climbing mountain is an enjoyable thing.

写作中非谓语动词常见的错误

3 、主动、被动含义混淆

A team calling itself the supper cook.

3. —Which team is good at cooking? —A team called itself the supper cook.

A team called the supper cook.

1. ① It is high time we took part in some activities.

② We want to make ourselves more healthy.

2. ① A girl climbed so hard that she lost her temper.

② She complained about the long walk.

3. ① The monitor has set a good example for us .

② Therefore, the monitor deserves the honor and we should learn from her .

Connection

① It is high time we took part in some activities.

② We want to make ourselves more healthy.

It is high time we took part in some activities to make ourselves more healthy.

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目的状语

① Wangqi climbed so hard that she lost her temper. ② She complained about the long walk.

Wangqi got so angry that she lost her temper, complaining about the long walk.

伴随状语

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① The monitor has set a good example for us .

② Therefore, the monitor deserves the honor and we should learn from her .

Having set a good example for us, the monitor deserves the honor and we should learn from her .

原因状语

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play music make happy

Playing music makes themhappy.

________ by the reporter from CCTV, the man said he was very happy.

(interview)

Interviewed

Moyan stood there ___________ by many reporters.

surrounded

Having listened to the song called “Gangnam Style”, we burst out

laughing.

用非谓语结构美化句子1. 因为在这国家又没有朋友，她觉得要想找到工作是不可能

的。Because she has no friend in the country, she found it

impossible to find a job.

2. 发现学生下午昏昏欲睡的样子，老师竭尽所能来激发(arouse) 他们的兴趣。

The teacher found students sleepy in the afternoon and did

everything he could to arouse their interest.

3. 这本用简易英语写成的书很容易读懂The book, which was written in simple English, is easy to

understand.4. 他们是来自于几个国家的游客。They are visitors who come from several countries.

用非谓语结构美化句子

1. 因为在这国家又没有朋友，她觉得要想找到工作是不可能的。

Because she has no friend in the country, she

found it impossible to find a job.

用非谓语结构Having no friend in the country, she found it

impossible to find a job.

2. 发现学生下午昏昏欲睡的样子，老师竭尽所能来激发 (arouse) 他们的兴趣。

The teacher found students sleepy in the

afternoon and did everything he could to

arouse their interest.

用非谓语结构Finding students sleepy in the afternoon,

the teacher did everything he could to arouse their interest.

3. 这本用简易英语写成的书很容易读懂

The book, which was written in simple

English, is easy to understand.

用非谓语结构The book , written in simple English, is easy

to understand .

4. 他们是来自于几个国家的游客。They are visitors who come from several countries.

用非谓语结构They are visitors coming from several countries.

1. It’s high time that we took part in some activities to make ourselves more healthy.

2. Wangqi got so angry that she lost her temper, complaining about the long walk.

3. Having set a good example for us, the monitor deserves the honor and we should learn from her.

4. Playing music makes them happy.

5. Interviewed by the reporter from CCTV, the man said he was very happy.

6.Moyan stood there surrounded by many reporters.

7. Having listened to the song called “Gangnam Style”, we burst out laughing.

8. Having no friend in the country, she found it impossible to find a job.

9. Finding students sleepy in the afternoon, the teacher did everything he could to arouse their interest.

10. The book , written in simple English, is easy to understand .

11. They are visitors coming from several countries.

高考临近，保持良好的心态有助于减轻焦虑，还能增强克服困难的勇气 。

Step1 ：拆分成几个简单句 ( 中文 )①高考临近。②保持良好的心态很重要。③它有助于减轻焦虑（ relax）和勇敢地克服困难。

Step2 ：分别翻译这几个简单句① National College Entrance Examination is coming.

② It is important to have a right attitude.

③ It helps us to relax and overcome difficulties bravely.

Step3 ：合并句子

With National College Entrance Examination coming, it is important to have a right attitude to relax and overcome difficulties bravely.

① National College Entrance Examination is coming.

② It is important to have a right attitude.

③ It helps us to relax and overcome difficulties bravely.

Sentence1:

Step3 ：合并句子

With College Entrance Examination coming, it is important to have a right attitude which helps us to relax and overcome difficulties bravely.

① College Entrance Examination is coming.

② It is important to have a right attitude.

③ It helps us to relax and overcome difficulties bravely.

Sentence2:

建议 有足够的睡眠是必要的。

原因1.它能有效的改善我们的课堂学习。2.保持健康的身体是进一步学习及工作的基础。

（ 2011 高考模拟）要求： 1. 用 2- 3 句话表达表格内容 2. 2- 3 句话要有连贯性

Having a try

建议 有足够的睡眠是必要的。

原因

1.它能有效的改善我们的课堂学习。

2.保持健康的身体是进一步学习及工作的基础。

Having a try

It is necessary to have enough sleep .

Having enough sleep is necessary.

It will be an effective way to improve our learning in the class.

Keeping healthy is the base for our further study and work.

To Keep healthy is the base for our further study and work.

Passage ：

Having enough sleep is necessary,

because it will be an effective way to

improve our learning in the class.

Moreover, to keep healthy is the base for

our further study and work.

Tip: Never ignore the conjunction.

基础写作：• 用英语写一篇关于四川地震的简介： 写作内容：• 2008 年 5 月 12 日，一场特大地震袭击了四

川省。 地震造成了成千上万人无家可归。大量的人员受伤，甚至丧命。为了营救那些受困和被埋的人，政府及时采取有效的措施，派遣士兵到受灾地区。听到这个噩耗后，全世界的人们都伸出了援助之手。尽管他们失去了一切，但他们正全力以赴。他们克服重重困难，重建家园。

• 参考词汇： 袭击： hit/strike • 受灾地区 : the earthquake-stricken

area

• 整合成 5 个句子：• 1 、 2008 年 5 月 12 日，一场特大地震袭击

了四川省，造成了成千上万人无家可归。• 2 、大量的人员受伤，甚至丧命。• 3 、为了营救那些受困和被埋的人，政府及时

采取有效的措施，派遣士兵到受灾地区。• 4 、听到这个噩耗后，全世界的人们都伸出了

援助之手。• 5 、尽管他们失去了一切，但他们正全力以赴，

克服重重困难，重建家园。

• On May 12th,2008, a worst earthquake struck Sichuan Province ， causing thousands of people homeless. A great number of people were injured or even killed. To rescue the trapped and buried people, the government immediately took effective measures, sending the soldiers to the earthquake-stricken areas. Hearing the terrible news, the people all over the world came together to help them. Although having lost everything, they are trying their best to overcome all kinds of difficulties to rebuild their home.

Rewrite the composition and hand it in.

Homework