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Brunk Page 1 David Brunk Professor Malcolm Campbell English 1103 4/2/2015 Disconnected: Have Cell Phones Hindered Modern Day Society? If you were born before the invention of the cell phone, you probably remember what society was like before communication was immediate. If you wanted to talk to someone, you would have to mail a letter or even go see them in person. You wouldn’t have constant access to someone’s whereabouts; what they are doing, who they are with, and even what they are eating. The cell phone has revolutionized our way of life. We can now know all of this information in an instant. All of this technology seems to be a fantastic improvement on the surface, but a more profound analysis might raise up issues that have been overlooked through this rapid technological growth. Does our ability to communicate instantly through cell phones diminish the quality and value of face-to-face interaction? What are some of the positive and negative effects of cell phones on society? Are there potential health risks from cell phones? These questions have yet to be answered as we are moving forward with technology but forgetting to observe the possibly detrimental effects of our progress. As humans, one of the things we desire most is that deep connection with other people. Whether it is with a family member, a significant other, a friend, or even co-workers, it is

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    David Brunk

    Professor Malcolm Campbell

    English 1103

    4/2/2015

    Disconnected: Have Cell Phones Hindered Modern Day Society?

    If you were born before the invention of the cell phone, you probably remember what

    society was like before communication was immediate. If you wanted to talk to someone, you

    would have to mail a letter or even go see them in person. You wouldnt have constant access

    to someones whereabouts; what they are doing, who they are with, and even what they are

    eating. The cell phone has revolutionized our way of life. We can now know all of this

    information in an instant. All of this technology seems to be a fantastic improvement on the

    surface, but a more profound analysis might raise up issues that have been overlooked through

    this rapid technological growth. Does our ability to communicate instantly through cell phones

    diminish the quality and value of face-to-face interaction? What are some of the positive and

    negative effects of cell phones on society? Are there potential health risks from cell phones?

    These questions have yet to be answered as we are moving forward with technology but

    forgetting to observe the possibly detrimental effects of our progress.

    As humans, one of the things we desire most is that deep connection with other people.

    Whether it is with a family member, a significant other, a friend, or even co-workers, it is

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    something that we need. In modern day society, cell phones seem to have taken away from our

    face-to-face interaction. If you need to get in touch with someone, you can simply send a text

    and contact them instantly. But is this really the same as talking to them in person? You cannot

    hear their tone of voice or see their body language through a text message. In other words,

    some of the emotional aspect of human interaction has been stripped away. On the flip side,

    using a cell phone while you are with other people rather than by yourself can put a damper on

    those relationships. According to CNN, researchers from the University of Essex found that

    people who engaged in personal discussions when a cell phone was nearby- even if neither was

    actually using it- reported lower relationship quality and less trust for their partner. (Kerner,

    CNN.com) Trust has become a big issue with cell phones. The cell phone enables one to

    reconnect with people from the past, whether it is an old friend from high school or a distant

    relative. But this easy access poses a threat to relationships because of the ability to reconnect

    with a past romantic partner. According to a study by Huffington Post, 25% of people confessed

    to using their cell phone to discreetly flirt with another individual who was not their partner.

    (Gray, HuffingtonPost.com) So what does this mean? Does this mean that everyone who

    purchases a cell phone for themselves is going to be incapable of communicating effectively

    with another person face-to-face? Certainly not. It is, however, something important to think

    about if a cell phone becomes a replacement for social interaction rather than an

    enhancement.

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    Cell phone use has not only posed a social issue in society, but also a safety issue. The

    temptation to pull often causes people to send text messages when walking across the street or

    even driving. Distracted driving has become a large issue ever since the invention of the cell

    phone. Every day in the United States, 9 people are killed and more than 1153 people are

    injured in a car crash that reported having involved a distracted driver. (Centers for Disease

    Control and Prevention) State and federal laws have been drawn up in response to these high

    rates of distracted driving accidents. Currently, 45 out of the 50 states have laws that ban

    texting while driving. (Governors Highway Safety Association)

    On the other hand, there is an abundance of benefits that have stemmed from the

    invention of the cell phone. Global communication has gone from a distant possibility of the

    future to reality in a shockingly short amount of time. This means that communication between

    nations can be instant, speeding up diplomatic decisions. News of what is happening on

    another continent can become common knowledge to the everyday citizen of a completely

    different country. There are also numerous benefits to the individual. People who have speech

    issues can use voice control on their cell phone to communicate efficiently. Businesses can

    increase productivity with the ability to intercommunicate with its employees faster. Since

    texting and driving has become a controversial topic in America, cell phone companies have

    implemented hands free options onto cell phones, enabling one to send a text or play music

    while still focusing on the road. There are endless ways that cell phones have positively affected

    our society.

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    Some people have been concerned about possible health risks of using a cell phone.

    According to the Centers for Disease Control and Prevention, cell phones do emit

    radiofrequency radiation to send signals. This type of radiation is different than X-rays, which

    have been confirmed to be harmful to humans. But there is no scientific evidence available that

    suggests that cell phones cause cancer. Studies are currently being conducted to determine

    whether or not there are health risks from using a cell phone. If there are health risks, however,

    they are assumed to be minimal. Certainly the benefits of having a cell phone outweigh these

    miniscule risks. If you find yourself in an emergency situation, you will be glad that you took the

    possible risk and had a cell phone available to call for help.

    So why are cell phones so addicting? Why do we feel the need to pull the device out of

    our pocket every time there is dead air in the room? Is our digital profile more important than

    our actual physical reality? If you look around on a college campus you will find that the

    majority of students walking by you are looking down, scrolling through on their phones. A

    recent study published in the Journal of Behavioral Addictions found that female college

    students spend an average of ten hours a day on their cell phones while male college students

    spend an average of eight hours. (Almendrala, Huffingtonpost.com) This study reveals

    something about our nature. Some people attribute their cell phone addiction to the ability to

    make your image better than it actually is. People use their cell phones to escape the physical

    reality, which is very demanding. People also dont like to feel disconnected from the world. If a

    person isnt receiving the latest updates from their favorite celebrities or sports team, they feel

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    uninformed. Some researchers suggest that this desire to feel connected to other people

    constantly is simply human nature, while others say that it is an addiction. In a 2013 blog post

    for Psychology Today, psychology professor Ira Hyman, Ph.D., writes that researchers may just

    be observing the rise of a new norm in social interaction: immediate, hyper-connected, and

    here to stay. (Almendrala, Huffingtonpost.com) In other words, being constantly updated and

    talking to your friends via text messages throughout the day may just be our new way of life. Is

    this a good thing or a bad thing? Certainly staying in touch with loved ones and relatives and

    friends who live farther away seems like a good idea. Being able to see breaking news about

    what is happening near you and getting weather updates instantly can save you a lot of time.

    With all of this information readily available, your time can be spent doing more important

    things like getting some work done or spending time with friends and family. But constantly

    checking your phone can become and addictive behavior. It can put a strain on your

    relationships and even cause you to miss important things in a class lecture. I know this from

    experience.

    To conclude, as we are ever progressing as a race; continuing to develop newer

    technologies, there is sometimes a disconnection between the rate at which we are progressing

    and the rate that we analyze how this progression affects our society. When cell phones were

    invented, it set wheels into motion for an exponential growth in the next few years. We were

    able to develop futuristic technology that we never thought possible. The cell phone can

    decrease the quality of our interpersonal relationships and sometimes even ruin them. There

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    are endless positive effects that they have had on our society including: improvement on

    communication, helping everyday life, and helping us stay in touch with people. There are also

    some negative effects. They have become a safety issue. People become distracted and cause

    accidents on the road. I think that when observing these effects, the positive effects certainly

    outweigh the bad and the invention and implementation of cell phones into society is a step

    forward.

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    Works Cited

    Almendrala, Emma. Our Creepy Attachment to Cell Phones Could be an Addiction.

    Huffingtonpost.com. Web. 1 April, 2015.

    Distracted Driving. Centers for Disease Control and Prevention. Web. 29 March, 2015

    Distracted Driving Laws. Governors Highway Safety Association. Web. 1 April, 2015

    Frequently Asked Questions About Cell Phones and Your Health. Centers for Disease Control

    and Prevention. Web. 28 March, 2015.

    Gray, Emma. Relationships and Technology: Is Texting Ruining Romance?

    Huffingtonpost.com. Web. 27 March, 2015.

    Kerner, Ian. Your Smartphone May be Powering Down Your Relationship. CNN.com. Web. 29

    March, 2015