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Morgan Bailey
Photobook
Caldwell
4/26/13
Book Revisions
The feedback I got from my group was very helpful. They helped me with
text, small, classic, non intrusive. They told me to just use the titled work and not
words that remind me of my grandfather. They also showed me the quality issues
with I have fixed. The layout they liked, but they added that I could double up photos
on the same page that were not as strong. They also didn’t like my experimental
stuff so I didn’t even revisit that. The cover was an issue. It was too small and wasn’t
high quality. I totally changed the cover to a much more interesting and inviting
image. I also added in a front page of text telling his story and how he got into
photography. Small adjusted had to be made all around but I have kept my main
idea pretty firm.