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蘇軾 東坡)January 8, 1037 – August 24, 1101 

Su Shi (Su Dong-Po) Poem

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山色空濛雨亦奇.

欲把西湖比西子,淡妝濃抹總相宜.

*潋滟（瀲灩|瀲灧）

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The following words were copied from an e-mail of Nov. 29,

2015, which was sent by a music teacher - Mr. Lou. His

remarks may be helpful to those future singers of this song.Johnson Gao

下面的话是从一个 2015 年 11 月 29 日的电子邮件复制

下来, 由音乐老师楼先生所写。他的评论可能有助于这

首歌的那些未来的歌手。约翰逊高

高先生, 您好！

为苏轼诗词作曲，很具特色！

曲调优美，意味深长！ 在上下阙的结尾处，很妙！ 上

阙结尾有一句十六分音符，引人入胜；下阙结尾，下行

级进到主音，情滿意足，稳定自信，直击心灵！

曲调布局奇妙，有大师风范。从主和弦开始，转入下属

和弦，顺势进入属和弦，接着合情合理，理所当然地回到主音，圆满结束！

接下来，意犹未尽 ，再加一段，反复吟唱。在原有的

，很成功的曲调上，改为四三拍，的的确确是最好的作

法！ 另外，每句都是由低音向上跳进，充分表现了对

美景的赞美！

不当处，请指正！ 祝

快乐 幸福！ 楼