高三专题复习研究课 Proof Reading ⑴ Have you ever made any mistakes in your everyday life?...

高三专题复习研究课Proof Reading

⑴ Have you ever made any mistakes in your everyday life?

⑵ Do you think that there is someone that doesn’t make any mistakes in his life?

⑶ What will you do if you make some mistakes in your life?

⑷ Does it matter if you make a mistake in your everyday life?

Ask Ss some questions about the mistakes in life.

Ⅰ. Lead-in

短文改错的特点短文改错题是给出一篇大约 100 个单词的短文 , 要求对其中右边标有题号的 10 行作出是否有错的判断 , 如有错就将其改正 . 本题考查的方式是 :1) 错词更换例如 : I think I liked those classes because I felt that it helped me understand how the world works. _______2) 缺词补漏例如 : They eager to know everything about China and asked me lots of questions. ________3) 多词删除例如 : I was used to watch TV every night. But now I’m too busy to watch it. ________

were

they

was

∧

ⅡⅡ. Presentation. Presentation

① What a nice weather it is! ② The Smiths did his best to help me. “③ Stop talking,” he said his students. ④ It’s very kind for you to do so. ⑤ Although he studied hard, but he failed. ⑥ Please tell them come here at once.

Exercises:

_۸_

۸

1. a 2. their 3. to 4. of 5. but 6. to

Check up

1. Unnecessary word 多一词2. Missing word 少一词3. Error word 错一词4. 此行正确标记：√

四种类型：四种类型：

年度

谓语动词

名词

连词

冠词

形容词或副词

代词

非谓语动词

介词

2005 4 1 1 0 0 1 0 2

2004 1 1 3 1 0 0 0 3

2003 3 1 0 0 0 3 1 1

2002 2 1 1 0 1 1 1 2

2001 2 2 2 1 0 0 1 1

合计 12 6 7 2 1 5 3 9

01--05 短文改错高考考点分布统计表 1

测试点

表 2: 改错类型统计

多词缺词错词正确

2005 2 1 6 1

2004 1 1 7 1

2003 2 1 6 1

2002 2 2 5 1

2001 2 1 6 1

合计 9 6 30 5

测试点

年度年度

04 高考短文改错 ( 浙江 ) Passage 1Nowadays millions of people of all age take pleasure in 1.______hobby which is both interested and fun. And every year 2.more and more people start a stamp collection of your own 3.and discover an interest which can even last lifetime. Starting 4.your collection of stamps are easy because they are everywhere.5.Holiday and birthday postcards from relatives and letters 6.from friends can all provide you for stamps from all over 7.the world. So once you’ve started collecting seriously, you 8.will probably want to join in the Stamp Collectors’ Club 9.which exist to add more stamps to your collection. 10.

ages

1. 根据 all 可知 , 这里所说的是数以百万计的各种不同年龄的人 .

04 高考短文改错 ( 浙江 )

Nowadays millions of people of all age take pleasure in a 1.________hobby which is both interested and fun. And every year 2.________more and more people start a stamp collection of your own 3.and discover an interest which can even last lifetime. Starting 4.your collection of stamps are easy because they are everywhere.5.Holiday and birthday postcards from relatives and letters 6.from friends can all provide you for stamps from all over 7.the world. So once you’ve started collecting seriously, you 8.will probably want to join in the Stamp Collectors’ Club 9.which exist to add more stamps to your collection. 10.

agesinteresting

2. 从句子结构可以看出 , which is interested and fun是修饰 hobby 的定语从句 . interested 不能用来说明 hobby, 应改为 interesting.


Nowadays millions of people of all age take pleasure in a 1.________hobby which is both interested and fun. And every year 2.________more and more people start a stamp collection of your own 3.______and discover an interest which can even last lifetime. Starting 4.your collection of stamps are easy because they are everywhere. 5.Holiday and birthday postcards from relatives and letters 6.from friends can all provide you for stamps from all over 7.the world. So once you’ve started collecting seriously, you 8.will probably want to join in the Stamp Collectors’ Club 9.which exist to add more stamps to your collection. 10.

agesinteresting

their

3. 这是一个逻辑错误 . 应将 your 改为 their 才能与主语 people 相呼应 .


Nowadays millions of people of all age take pleasure in a 1.________hobby which is both interested and fun. And every year 2.________more and more people start a stamp collection of your own 3.________and discover an interest which can even last lifetime. Starting 4.________your collection of stamps are easy because they are everywhere.5._______Holiday and birthday postcards from relatives and letters 6._______from friends can all provide you for stamps from all over 7._______the world. So once you’ve started collecting seriously, you 8._______will probably want to join in the Stamp Collectors’ Club 9._______which exist to add more stamps to your collection. 10._______

agesinteresting

theira

4. lifetime 是一个可数名词 . 在句子中 , 单数可数名词前总是有修饰语的 . 根据句意 , 应在 lifetime 前加 a,以表示 “一辈子” .



agesinteresting

theirais

5. 主谓不一致 . 一个动名词短语作主语时应视为单数 . 故 are 要改为 is.



agesinteresting

theirais

6. 改行无错误 .



agesinteresting

theirais

with

7. provide sb. with sth. 是固定词组 . 如果使用 for,则应该说 provide sth. for sb.



agesinteresting

theirais

withBut

8. 行文逻辑错误 . 根据前后句的意思 , 应是转折关系 .



agesinteresting

theirais

withBut in

9. 加入而成为其中一员应该用 join. join the club 应该属于此类 .join in 后面应跟一项活动 .



agesinteresting

theirais

withBut in

exists

10. 主谓不一致 . 句中 which 指代 the Stamp Collectors’ Club, 故应视为单数 .

解题技巧

1 、通读全文，掌握大意。

2 、眼观六路，联系上下文。

3 、先易后难。正确的句子放在最后改。

4 、不能改动两个词。

5 、正确使用批改符号。

No context, no text.

短文改错的解题方法1. 首先要细读全文，弄懂全篇的意思。在读的过程可把初步确认的错误标出。

2. 然后再从以下几个方面仔细推敲。（ 1）动词→查时态，第三人称单数、非谓语动词、语态、主

复句时态是否一致。（ 2）代词→查前后是否一致。 it 的用法，以及指示代词、人称

代词、不定代词、关系代词的用法是否有误。（ 3）介词→查搭配及容易误用的介词。（ 4）形容词 / 副词→查词性有否混淆，形容词与副词的比较级、最高级的用法，修饰比较级的副词等。（ 5）名词→查单复数，可数不可数，是否加冠词， the ， a还

是 an ，主谓一致问题。（ 6）连词→查上下文之间的逻辑关系。有否误用。3.重读全文，仔细推敲改正后的短文。读起来是否通顺，逻辑

思维与短文脉络是否合理，词汇的用法、句子结构是否合理。

Ⅵ. Consolidation

一、四不改。即：① 标点符号不改。② 大小不改。③ 词序错误不改（不是不改，而是按错词或少词来改）。④ 在纲外生词不改。文中出现带汉语注释的词，在句中不可能用错。二、规范做题方法。①要严格按照示范，即用规定的符号去改错。不要用文字去说明或用箭头去表示。②换词，去词和加词三者不可混淆。

短文改错应注意的问题

Passage 2

After I finished the school this year,I began 1.________

to look for work.Now several month later,I still 2._________

hadn’t found the job that I was interested .Last Sunday 3._________

morning I received a phone call from a man calling him 4._________

Mr.Smith.He said to me on the phone, “I hear you do 5._________

very well in your studies.I may have a job for you.” 6._________

I entered his office with a beaten heart.How I hoped 7.__________

that I will go through the job-hunting talk today and he 8.__________

would take me on as a lab assistant.But to my surprised, 9.__________

what he said disappointing.He only needed a model. 10._________

∧ in

___ would

___ himself

＼ the＼____ months

__ did

√

_____ beating

_______ surprise

∧ was

Ⅴ. Group-work

Passage 3

Baseball( 棒球 ) is one of America’s favorite sport. 1.__________

Many big cities where have professional( 职业的 )baseball 2.__________

teams.The baseball season are from April to October. 3.__________

During the baseball season,millions people go to 4.__________

stadiums to watch baseball.People also watched 5.__________

baseball in TV and listen to games on the radio. 6.__________

People of all ages like play baseball.Many 7.__________

child pay Little League baseball in the spring and 8.__________

summer.Many adults enjoy baseball either. 9.__________

They play after work and on weekends. 10.__________

∧ of

______ watch

____ sports

＼ where＼__ is

__ on

___ playing

____ children

_____ too

√

Passage 4

In Wednesday morning,Tom was walking along 1.__________

the streets.Suddenly he heard two shots.It came 2.__________

from the bank.He ran to the bank but saw 3._________

a man coming out of.The man was short and 4.__________

fat with red hair.He had a bag of money or 5.__________

a gun in his hands.The man ran away and was 6._________

disappeared behind a bus.That afternoon Tom 7.__________

went a film.He saw the thief again and phoned the 8.__________

police.They caught the thief.How an exciting day 9.__________

for Tom!The bank gave him 100 for a reward. 10._________﹩

_ They

＼ was＼

∧ to

__ On

___ and

＼ of＼__ and

√

____ What

___ as

谢谢你的光临指导

请留下宝贵意见

高三专题复习研究课 Proof Reading ⑴ Have you ever made any mistakes in your everyday life?...

Documents

Transcript of 高三专题复习研究课 Proof Reading ⑴ Have you ever made any mistakes in your everyday life?...